Tuesday, December 06, 2005

Optimistic

naked
fingers entwined with mine, held strong over my head
mouth on my breast
pounding heart, ragged breath
without conscious thought my body arches to yours in wanton need
i ask you, overwhelm me
fill me
pull me out of the dark
away from ambivalence
allow me a blaze of hope
a moment of escape

10 comments:

TJ said...

wow, I've been away for a little bit but I picked a good day to come back to your blog! very great post...

Annalis said...

Zombie - Sorry about the cold shower...er...no I'm not.

TJ - Hi, glad you're back!

Her Daddy's Eyes said...

*claps* Well done!
~Eyes

Annalis said...

Eyes - Thanks!

Marcus - Hi, thanks for stopping by.

WoodChuck said...

Can I take a stab at a masculine reply. Purely platonic and probably the full glass talking. But here goes.

vulnerable,
hearts race our breath without repose,
i pull you close,
you wrap me in,
your whispers invite,
closer tonight,
my strenth to pour,
without reserve,
drink my wine,
our passions will soar,
tell me your story,
show me the scars,
come once more,
we'll taste love again.

Mad Munkey said...

It would have to be more than a moment...

Annalis said...

Chuck - beautiful...thank you. Definitely glass half full. Very nice.

MM - yes, but I'll take a moment for now. :)

Annalis said...

Zombie - *smiles* :)

eleKtrofly said...

god that's hot :)

Annalis said...

Thank you elektrofly!